From 5133e5131beb489ff8cfdd7bca7735b5fe0831ff Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrew Ozz <admin@laptoptips.ca>
Date: Tue, 1 May 2018 11:43:22 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Privacy: fix and improve the help text about adding a privacy
 policy page.

Props idea15, xkon.
See #43435.
Built from https://develop.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@43053


git-svn-id: http://core.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@42882 1a063a9b-81f0-0310-95a4-ce76da25c4cd
---
 wp-admin/privacy.php    | 11 ++++++-----
 wp-includes/version.php |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/wp-admin/privacy.php b/wp-admin/privacy.php
index bb1cbb4262..c87c68f48a 100644
--- a/wp-admin/privacy.php
+++ b/wp-admin/privacy.php
@@ -129,13 +129,14 @@ require_once( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 	<p>
 		<?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
 		<?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'The new policy will include the suggested privacy text.' ); ?>
 	</p>
 	<p>
-		<?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your plugins.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, after a WordPress or a plugin update.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'The new page will include help and suggestions for your privacy policy.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'However, it is your responsibility to use those resources correctly, to provide the information that your privacy policy requires, and to keep that information current and accurate.' ); ?>
+	</p>
+	<p>
+		<?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it. On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your themes and plugins.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, especially after an update. There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
 	</p>
 	<?php
 	if ( $privacy_policy_page_exists ) {
diff --git a/wp-includes/version.php b/wp-includes/version.php
index 10eb5746a6..57d41393c8 100644
--- a/wp-includes/version.php
+++ b/wp-includes/version.php
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
  *
  * @global string $wp_version
  */
-$wp_version = '5.0-alpha-43052';
+$wp_version = '5.0-alpha-43053';
 
 /**
  * Holds the WordPress DB revision, increments when changes are made to the WordPress DB schema.